homework #4 :D

Chapter 6-
#3: In order to #3, I have to do #2 first so-
My present job is highly tedious and requires me to do unnecessary amounts of work. Sometimes I am head cashier and stand at the front desk for six hours waiting for customers. I'm not allowed to leave my register to do something more productive, even when there are no customers. Other times I have to face, meaning I make each aisle look more presentable. Approximately two minutes after I finish facing an aisle, it is messy when I go back to check it. The hard work I put into keeping my store tidy and organized seems to fail.

- My job serves no substantial purpose and none of my hard work is worthwhile.
- My job as a cashier helps people far less than when I am away from the register and have time to interact with them. My hard work facing is never worthwhile.
- I think my transitions from my original paragraph are just fine.
- I would take out the phrase "for six hours" because it is not necessary. I would take out the word "tidy" and just keep "organized".
- I'm pretty sure my spelling and grammar is okay.

#5: An idea for my blog? Hmph.